Thin air
I see in the thin air
the color of sky
on fire
I see in the thin air
a child's play
pictures are holding hands
I see in the thin air
a mystery as clear as crystal
wearing urgency
I see in the thin air
a tiny flower
fading into the hill
a little poem left behind
- Re: Thin airposted on 07/19/2005
呵呵
好诗:)
近来心血那个来潮………………想学英语了我。
谢谢笨笨,我基本看得懂~~~ - Re: Thin airposted on 07/19/2005
末黑 wrote:
呵呵
好诗:)
Benben is expected to say, "where, where", in a shy way with read cheek fading into the thin air.
Where 好? Why 好? What 好? 好 or not 好 doesn't matter, but it does matter how you interpret 好--- that's something I am looking for. :)
- Re: Thin airposted on 07/20/2005
末黑,你又看懂了. 那你看出来笨JJ越来越想上幼儿园了吗:)
你的那<<三个小女孩>>怎么还没交啊?
令胡冲,你从中国回来啦. 你的话我又似懂非懂. 不过不用想了, 我已找到了特真理的部分,就是"好 or not 好 doesn't matter",因为这是最后一首了. 当然以后中国话还是要说的. 我英文写长了就错, 写诗错了也不叫错,所以写过几首. 我自己喜欢那首"NEVER ABSENT", 写得那个情真意切.这首比较CUTE吧 我的自我感觉啊.
很高兴你们两个人看了, 是我想要的最好的句号.
- posted on 07/20/2005
当然,我们不能苛刻诗意必须有深邃的哲思,诗境必须有升华的意象,诗句必须是凝练的情词!
那未,我们还写诗?
因为简单,直抒心臆,天真,一相情愿,随心随性。因为我喜欢这风格。
感觉。我也说不出个所以然来。有某种我不知名的感觉,我就认为自己懂了。
我不是考古学家,不是光头戴眼睛的书呆子,不是执意沉迷谴词造句的变态机器人。吾恨吾师!
笨笨JJ,那天一个女人问我,女人要有什么条件才能同时拥有成年人和小孩子的好处?!
这是一个主观,相当主观的问题!
那三个小女孩呀,咳--咳--想写几个月啦——我要把她们生下来,慢慢生。还有那个电影的观后感呢——给点时间我吧。:-)
总而言之,我更喜欢看你的。卡卡 - Re: Thin airposted on 07/20/2005
末黑,我真想把"读了末黑的话" 添加到"让我快乐的事(欢迎大家踊跃添加)"那条线里去.:-)
- Re: Dream Wellposted on 11/16/2005
- posted on 11/16/2005
笨笨 wrote:
Thin air
I see in the thin air
the color of sky
on fire
I see in the thin air
a child's play
pictures are holding hands
I see in the thin air
a mystery as clear as crystal
wearing urgency
I see in the thin air
a tiny flower
fading into the hill
a little poem left behind
Better leave "are" out. :)
i see in the thin air
a child's play
pictures holding hands
- Re: Dream Wellposted on 11/16/2005
笨笨 wrote:
You are a well
The more I drill
The sweeter you get...
I'm drinking of you
you have more...
Leaning on you
The Devil drops his cup
Birds give sweet sounds...
Drinking of you
My dream well
I'm coming to be
as sweet as you...
I have a problem with this. You don't drink a well. You drink H2O from a well. :) - Re: Dream Wellposted on 11/16/2005
- Re: Dream Wellposted on 11/16/2005
- Thanks Givenposted on 11/22/2005
- posted on 11/22/2005
木匠看笨笨
哦笨笨,你总是给我正面
令我的注视躲闪不及
令欣赏没有了足够的“景深”
想抓拍你关门时的转身
却被你反射的光彩弄得曝光过度
你那件坠满IT的风衣
飘逸着世俗中相当优雅的自尊
木匠只有感慨的份儿
只有在和你十米的距离
看你快乐折腾:ABCD、ABCD、EFG
木匠只是爱好摄影
希望捉到你灿烂的笑容
我筹备了所有长焦变焦广角
企图从任何位置启动快门
哦笨笨,感恩节缓缓降临
你摆好了感恩的姿势(据说叫作POSE)
但太多人围观你天真乐观的笑脸
而我,只拍到一排牙齿
- Re: Thanks Givenposted on 11/22/2005
You make me smile.
:-) 一排牙齿
Have a nice Thanksgiving!!
王木匠 wrote:
木匠看笨笨
- Re: Thanks Givenposted on 11/24/2005
happy thanksgiving!!ben ben.
happy to give thanks to the heroes and heroines in cafe!!
so hard to get access to cafe in the damned school.so just express my retarding greetings till now.
feel happy to be here all the time. :>
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